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[hutter]

As a few here know, Jimbo and I have been putting together a comic book series. I'm posting up the first half of the first issue (the first story arc will run three issues) and I would appreciate any feedback, feel free to rip it to shreds if you think it warrants it.

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[TragicMagic]

"Krakt" - nice

Awesome work!

[zill]

"Never try to touch another man's staff".

<<Giggles like a school girl>>

I like it, but it needs more scantily clad chics.

[hutter]

[quote][i]Originally posted by zill[/i]
<br>"Never try to touch another man's staff".

<<Giggles like a school girl>>

I like it, but it needs more scantily clad chics.

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That's only the first 14 pages of the first issue which will be 23 pages. The scantily clad chicks start making their presence known by page 17. Every issue afterwards will have plenty of historic damsels in distress for Bud to make drunken passes at.

[TragicMagic]

[quote][i]Originally posted by hutter[/i]
<br>[quote][i]Originally posted by zill[/i]
<br>"Never try to touch another man's staff".

<<Giggles like a school girl>>

I like it, but it needs more scantily clad chics.

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That's only the first 12 pages of the first issue which will be 23 pages. The scantily clad chicks start making their presence known by page 17. Every issue afterwards will have plenty of historic damsels in distress for Bud to make drunken passes at.
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Make one of them Laura Branigan and I'll name my first born after you

[coop41]

I'm waiting for the movie.


Seriously, nice work.

[Bitter Almonds]

[quote][i]Originally posted by zill[/i]
<br>"Never try to touch another man's staff".

<<Giggles like a school girl>>

I like it, but it needs more scantily clad chics.

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<p align="justify">As a reader of [i]Heavy Metal[/i] and former collectro of animu and mango, I concur: this comic needs MOAR tits[}:)] The artwork is good; the cover reminds me a little of those mexican lewdie comics.


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[hutter]

We now have a publisher, and they're going to market Bud not only in english but also in german, spanish, italian, etc. I am stoked.