[quote][i]Originally posted by ghosty[/i]
<br>Well for what it's worth I cross referenced with several song-by song analysis books about Queen (including George Purvis's excellent and thoroughly researched "Queen: The Works") and the story is as follows:
David Bowie and Queen were recording at the same time. They decided to collaborate because...well..."why not?". The reworked a jam called "Feels Like" into some kind of shape. Bowie and Freddie Mercury took turns singing gibberish or whatever popped into their heads. Bowie and the band sat down to craft lyrics that scanned well with whatever they were scat singing in the previous take. Bowie hit upon the phrase "People In The Street" and that became the title of this new song. The collaboration became tense (and Sally will find this interesting) because Bowie, according to Brian May, began to feel strongly about the subject. He was vetoed by Queen who wanted the lyrics to be more "abstract" (Roger Taylor's, words although he sided with Bowie.) so they could be applied to numerous situations and nothing specific (again, that's the kind of band Queen were..a little something for everybody to grab on to...maybe Motors, Sally and I are all right at the same time! ). Bowie later complained in Q magazine that "It was a bit of a rush job. The original demo was better. Some of the lyrics make me cringe", obviously referring to the alterations Mercury and co. made. Although Roger Taylor was the most outspoken member of the band, he conceded that this policy Queen had regarding songwriting was why these songs have stood the test of time. He would use his side project The Cross to make his opinions known in songs that wouldn't have adhered to the Queen image.
I agree with Bowie about the lyrics but as a 30 year+ Queen fan I understand why they always did what they did.
And of course, judging by the exchange between Motors and Sally, I'm debating the artistic intentions of a Queen track with no one else but myself. [;)][/quote] Thanks. Here's a (rough) translation from an interview with the band in 1984:
http://www.queensongs.info/forum/forum. ... =4&shift=0
It jives mostly with what you wrote above.
The end of the page attempts to credit the different artists for their contributions to the song:<blockquote>- Title: David
- Bass-riff: David (for creating it) & John (for remembering it, and of course, playing it)
- Guitar-hook: Unconfirmed
- Piano lick: Unconfirmed
- Chord sequence (verse): Freddie (maybe)
- Chord sequence (bridge): Input from Brian (note the pedal bass), but not necessarily just him.
- Chord sequence ("interlude"): I'd say Fred, since that would be a good cause of John crediting the track to him (as opposed as if he just had written the verse progression)
- Lyrics (I mean, words): Mainly David, since we do know he wrote a part of them, and rationalized what each person contributed. Similar case as Freddie with 'The Miracle', I suppose.
- Production: Fred, Mack and David, or Roger and David (or a mix of both mixes)
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Melody:
That's the long one. Apparently, according to what David said, it was basically Fred and himself (which would match John's 1982 quote in a Japanese magazine). And they kind of make sense, so the melody would be this way:<ul><li>"Nonsense" singing (5 phrases distributed during the song): Freddie (which makes sense considering his classic ad-libs on stage, I can't picture Brian or John writing that)</li><li>The melody behind "pushing down on me...no man ask for", "burns a building down ... puts people on streets" (same 1 phrase): Difficult to assure, since the first time it's sung by David, the second by Freddie. So that part could be contributed by some of the other three, maybe</li><li>"terror of knowing ... let me out" (2 phrases, repeated): David.</li><li>"pray tomorrow takes me higher" (1 phrase, paraphrased later) - Freddie. No surprise, note that he evolved it the second time compared to the first, and the second has an ascending "trying higher notes and then nailing a climax" feature (remember the harmonies of Bo Rhap before the solo, or We Are The Champions before the chorus).</li><li>"pressure on people, people on streets" (1 phrase): David</li><li>"chippin' around ... pours" (1 phrase): Fred. You can totally tell it's a throwaway</li><li>"turn away ... blind man" (1 phrase, repeated): They both sing it, so who knows. Maybe that's another group part</li><li>"coming up with love ... torn" (1 phrase): David.</li></li><li>"why...yyyyyy" (2 phrase): Fred. Check the ascending feature above</li><li>"insanity...breaking" (1 phrase): David</li><li>"why can't give love...chance" (1 phrase, repeated): Fred</li><li>"give love give love..." (1 phrase, repeated and transposed): Fred</li><li>"love's such and old fashioned word" (1 phrase): David</li><li>final part of the 'interlude' (about two phrases, with repetitions/alterations): David. And it makes sense since a similar part is done by him in the second verse as backing vocal. And that'd also go with the "sung by the creator" rule</li><li>Total: David (8), Freddie (11), unknown (2). Quite a long and un-repetitive melody for an 80s single anyway. While Fred wrote more parts (according to this count), David wrote more actual melodies, while Fred was mostly ad-libs.</li><ul></blockquote>